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This page is for Good article nominations. A Good article is an article that adheres to certain quality standards but cannot reach Featured status due to its limited content. In turn, a Good article features more detail than a Comprehensive article. On this page, users can nominate articles that they believe are ready to be reviewed to achieve Good status.

The article-nomination process is not a way to showcase your favorite articles, but rather articles that are of high quality. Articles placed on this page will be extensively reviewed by experienced editors, including the presiding AgriCorps review panel. The nomination process will require the article nominator to respond to objections and improve the article until the requisite number of users supports the nomination.

In undertaking a nomination on this page, the nominator is taking responsibility for their nominated article. This means they need to thoroughly read the following instructions, implement them into their nominated article, and respond to given objections. Nominators are encouraged to ask more experienced editors for guidance and assistance, but self-sufficiency is a requirement of the article-nomination process. It is not inherently the job of reviewers to rewrite elements of an article, but rather to guide nominators to be able to fix issues themselves.

Your nomination is your responsibility. Nominations that severely neglect the following rules or otherwise fall idle after ten days will be subject to immediate removal.

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A Good article must…

  1. …be well-written and comprehensively detailed.
  2. …be unbiased, with a neutral point of view.
  3. …have comprehensive Appearances and Sources lists.
  4. …be fully referenced, including all quotes and images. See Wookieepedia:Sourcing for more information.
  5. …follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia.
  6. …be stable during and following the review process. This means the article does not change significantly from day to day with new content and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism or other administrative edits, such as page protection.
  7. …not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
  8. …have no redlinks.
  9. …provide at least one quote on the article if available. A leading quote at the beginning of the article is preferred but not required if no quotes are available. Although quotes may be placed in the body of the article, a maximum of one quote is allowed at the beginning of each section or subsection.
  10. …include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
  11. …include a reasonable number of images of the highest quality to illustrate the article, as source availability permits.
  12. …provide an introduction that gives a good summary of the topic, along with an article body that is at least 165 words long, not counting the "Behind the scenes" section (not including captions, quotes, headers, etc). Articles that fail to do so should be nominated for Comprehensive status. For clarification, please refer to this flowchart.
  13. …be at least 250 words long and must not exceed 1000 words. This word total counts the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, but not captions, quotes, headers, etc. For clarification, please refer to this flowchart.
  14. …not be deliberately shortened if it approaches the 1000-word limit.
  15. …be properly titled in accordance with Wookieepedia's treatment of Canon and Legends articles; i.e., no nomination may have "/Canon" in the title.

How to nominate:

  1. Select an article you feel is worthy of Good status. Nominated articles must meet all fifteen requirements stated above.
  2. Add {{GAnom}} at the top of the article you are nominating, and save the page. Please note that if the article you are nominating has been nominated for Good article status previously, you will need to specify the number of the nomination as a parameter (e.g. {{GAnom|second}}).
  3. Open the redlink in a new tab to create the nomination page, modifying the preloaded instructions as necessary.
  4. Copy the code provided to the bottom of this page.
  5. Purge the article to update the template.
  6. Other users will object to the nomination with issues and suggested improvements (errors, style, organization, images, notability, sources, etc).
  7. The nominator should then adjust the article until the objections are satisfied. The objector is responsible for striking their objection when it has been addressed, not the nominator. Additionally, reviewers will often copy-edit the article themselves as desired to fix any issues.
  8. Following their review, other users will vote to support the nomination. Users may not vote on their own nomination.
  9. Each user (except for members of the AgriCorps) shall be limited to six active Good article nominations at any given time. Any additional nominations will be subject to immediate removal.
  10. Users must successfully complete one Good article nomination before they can have two nominations active on the GAN page at one time. Likewise, users must complete two successful GA nominations before they can have three, and so on.

How to review:

  1. To review an article, users should read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
  2. The article should be reviewed with the criteria listed above, and any issues should be placed under the Object section of the article's nomination page. Objections should be clearly explained, and detail how the article can be improved.
  3. Objections should then be addressed by the nominator. Once the objector is satisfied, they should strike their objection. The nominator should not strike reviewers' objections for them.
  4. Once a reviewer is satisfied with the article, they can vote to support it. Please note that in order to support a nomination, you must have 50 mainspace edits.

Result:

  1. If a nomination has been active for over two days and has no active objections, it may pass with either a total of four votes coming from AgriCorps or Inquisitorius members—three of which must be AgriCorps votes—or a total of five votes, with at least three votes coming from AgriCorps or Inquisitorius members—two of which must be AgriCorps votes.
  2. Once the nomination is successful, the article will be considered a "Good article." As such, an AgriCorps member will archive the nomination using JocastaBot in Wookieepedia's Discord server and place the article on the Good articles page. Only members of the AgriCorps are allowed to perform these archiving tasks.
All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to immediate removal by AgriCorps vote if objections are not addressed after a period of 10 days.


Good article nominations

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Jinjang berry

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:19, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 431 words (44 introduction, 233 body, 154 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Ewoks

(2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 00:14, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 05:33, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
Ayrehead
  • If the berries are consistently spelt as gin-jang in Galaxies then I'd treat that as an alternate spelling rather then an error. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:18, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
    • They're only mentioned once, so I don't think there's really a factor of consistently vs inconsistently spelled within the game. Really there are three spellings (jinjang, jing-jang, and gin-jang) across what let's say are "primary sources" (both Ewoks episodes via D+ and SWG). I elected to rely on jinjang as the CSWE resolves the contradiction. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 10:55, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified male (Sullust)

  • Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 21:11, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Spooky reminded me this article was still a thing.
  • Word count at nomination time: 295 words (63 introduction, 218 body, 14 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS, WP:SWBF

(3 ACs/0 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 21:18, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 17:05, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:21, 26 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Something about the second sentence in the intro seems a bit off, can you reword it a little? Lewisr (talk) 00:21, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
  • If the pronouns are unspecified then the he/his used for the man should be changed Lewisr (talk) 00:21, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
Wok
  • In the intro, I think you should add "of the city" to the last bit of the first sentence so it explicitly says what the Empire is locking down - so: "during the Galactic Empire's lockdown of the city in 3 ABY."
  • Also in the intro, I would advocate for saying either "injured citizens" or "injured civilians" instead of just "injured" to be most specific.
  • I believe you forgot to officially introduce Namir in the Biography section.
  • Second sentence in the second paragraph of the bio, starting the sentence with "They" is a bit confusing since it can read as referring to the man with unspecified pronouns or the pair of Namir and Nunb. If you feel this works, I would opt for "The male" instead of they in this case so it is the most clear but also avoids starting two sentences in a row with "The man." Wok142 (talk) 17:05, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
    • This was briefly thought about during my initial, putting "they" and "pair" in separate regards in that sentence sorta implies that "they" is referring to the man. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:48, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
      • You are right, but reading it, it was still slightly confusing even if only for a moment. Assuming that other readers might encounter this the same way, I think it would be smoothest to amend this even if it is a minor thing. There does exist the implication as you said, but I would prefer that readers don't potentially have to pause to realize that when it could be worded in a clearer way from the start. Wok142 (talk) 21:38, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Odra

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:12, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Nominating this on behalf of Cwedin, who wrote it a bit before he fully retired from the site
  • Word count at nomination time: 890 words (156 introduction, 709 body, 25 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Ewoks

(2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:45, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 05:15, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

JocastaBot
  • Current word count violates Featured requirements: total word count is under 1000 words. JocastaBot (talk) 05:16, 9 August 2024 (UTC)

[[Category:Status article nominations that violate the word count requirement]]

Thrawn
  • Same thing as here, could you please rephrase/remove uses of "evil"? ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 17:19, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
    • Ah looking at this, I remember why I've been using that descriptor, the Insider article uses it. In any case nefarious is more neutral - done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:29, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Rystan system

(2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 18:05, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 05:40, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • You have an unfinished sentence here: "Kufa led Ro and Dis across the Golamaran ice flats and through underground tunnels into the Shrine, which "
    • no idea why the "which" was there or how I managed to not notice that, thanks Sanathestarr (talk) 19:57, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
  • The bit about it being considered a part of the Galactic Frontier feels a bit out of order – the way you have it now implies that you're introducing that fact, but you already mentioned the Frontier earlier in the paragraph.
    • attempted to reword it, does the current structure work? Sanathestarr (talk) 19:57, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Legends articles mention the grid in the bts because there's nowhere else to do so, but since it's IU info for canon you don't need to mention it there.
  • Review note: I made several small tweaks here, please don't hesitate to ask why I did so if any of them don't make sense right away. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:00, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Umwak's sidekick

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:31, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 354 words (67 introduction, 261 body, 26 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Ewoks

(2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 02:03, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:44, 23 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Haru and Saku's mother

  • Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 15:30, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 306 words (54 introduction, 204 body, 48 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Visions

(2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 00:45, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 15:22, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • I think there's some room for an image in the biography Lewisr (talk) 02:11, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
  • It seems like the villager is notable for a page Lewisr (talk) 02:11, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
    • Addressed both. For the image, I used one from the flashback since that's the only shot that has both sisters without Asu in between them, but I'm fine with changing it if you think either including Asu or leaving out one sister would be better. CometSmudge (talk) 16:05, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
      • Current works for me Lewisr (talk) 00:45, 22 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified scavenger 1

  • Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 23:02, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 313 words (68 introduction, 215 body, 30 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

(2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 02:37, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 05:40, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • The last sentence of the PT would imo be more suited in a skills/abilities section Lewisr (talk) 02:02, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Imperial Champalan Marine Resource Collective

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:45, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Reminds me of the Imperials that hunted Whaladons in Legends
  • Word count at nomination time: 309 words (64 introduction, 215 body, 30 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Ambition

(2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 16:08, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 04:55, 13 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Urce/Legends

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 14:40, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 569 words (69 introduction, 377 body, 123 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

(3 ACs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 03:26, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 05:47, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 05:45, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
  4. CometSmudge (talk) 15:40, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Comet
  • The Lesser Plooriod Cluster isn't actually a sector, so I think it would make more sense to put it in the region part of the infobox instead. CometSmudge (talk) 01:10, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Okinaa

  • Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 17:29, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 826 words (87 introduction, 693 body, 46 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Visions WP:Comics

(2 ACs/0 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:28, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 00:21, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • I think that the intro makes it more clear that all of the villagers had died, the body just mentions it as those that had, would you mind tweaking it slightly to match? Lewisr (talk) 01:47, 18 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

C.B. Lee

  • Nominated by: Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 16:50, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Moved the CAN to a GAN because of word limits
  • Word count at nomination time: 351 words (38 introduction, 313 body, 0 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Pride, WP:Creators

(1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Nice work, hope to see more from you! Lewisr (talk) 00:57, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • There's enough room in the biography for an image, perhaps of either the book cover or of Chase himself? Lewisr (talk) 16:13, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
  • I think the page should be rewrote a little to be in chronological order and less framed as just recounting what they said in interviews/podcasts after, if you look at other OOU people GAs you'll hopefully understand what I'm trying to ask as I'm struggling a bit to find the right way to phrase it haha Lewisr (talk) 21:23, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Rewrote it. Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 07:40, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
      • Made a few small tweaks, checking that works with you? Lewisr (talk) 05:29, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
        • Yeah, sure! Help is always welcome :) Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 06:52, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • I think you could also include some more about C.B.'s own SW history, just looking at the Tatooine Times interview for example they mentioned having loved SW since being a kid, not sure if in the commentary with Tom if they mentioned anything of note there? Lewisr (talk) 21:23, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
    • They didn't mention anything of note. Added their Star Wars experiences. Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 07:40, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Think it would be a good idea to vary some of the sentence starters (especially the paragraph starters since they all start with Lee) Lewisr (talk) 05:29, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I saw you did some variation, and I added a bit as well. Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 06:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • Some potentially missing External links: FB, PRH, Goodreads, Amazon. Note that I've copy-edited the S&S one to be below the social media handles; all commercial sites are usually listed after the author's personal socials.
    • Added the links. Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 06:41, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
      • Fairly certain the Amazon link is still live, and in that case, it would need to be using an archivedate/archiveurl. This is because (for all cites or templates like this, not just this case) archival is considered the superior method of saving content due to it being uneditable; as compared to screenshots which are accepted, but technically tamperable with.—spookywillowwtalk 07:10, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
        • I searched for the page in the Internet Archive, as well as other archival sites - with no success. The link itself is alive but it wasn't archived even once. Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 08:46, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
          • Uhm, in cases like these (and the vast majority of the time); the user is responsible for archiving these themselves. Archive.is has a box up top "My url is alive and I want to archive its content"; plug the link in, click, wait, and let it archive. Most of the time, links aren't archived prior and so searching for whether someone has in the past isn't relevant. WebArchive, archive.is, and many others all have a way to do this. Though minor and could do so myself for you, this is a really important thing for status article nominators to learn, so this will need to be done. Anytime a link is live, unless its behind a subscription, it will almost always be able to be archived by whoever wants to add it to the (incomplete) online archives.—spookywillowwtalk 20:09, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Tattooine Times ref will need its quote parameter removed because it is being used to source more information than that alone. That field is intended for direct quotes when a OOU source is being used for only one piece of info; since this has several, all of them wouldn't fit in that field (a description field, which seems to be what it's being used for, isn't a feature in WebCite).
    • Removed the quote. Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 06:41, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Should the Spotify template not be marked with nolive=1? Seems to lead to a dead link for me.
  • Chase Wilsorr upon first link should add some form of context for him, whether that be him being a rebel or a rank or some such.
  • Review note: copy-edit; per Liz Marsham and others (and how Wook doesn't list audiobooks in BtSes of IU articles, we usually do not list audiobooks within the tables and keep them sources-only, unless there was any sort of heavy adjustment or alteration made to the work (it stays in StoryCite instead). Small note for in the future to watch underlinking and format; for the audiobook reference, it was pipelinked as a sole word instead of the full format (though ultimately, that reference wasn't needed).—spookywillowwtalk 20:34, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Got it! Thanks for the information. Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 06:41, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Logray's magic powder

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 15:59, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 846 words (169 introduction, 648 body, 29 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Ewoks

(2 ACs/2 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote HUZZAH JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:42, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:27, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  3. CometSmudge (talk) 18:16, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 02:53, 28 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • Any chance a timeframe can be narrowed down? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:15, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I can try to narrow it down to an eleven-year period between Wicket being born and Logray becoming medicine man if you think that's worth it. Imperators II(Talk) 07:04, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
      • I think it is. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:09, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
        • Actually scratch the bit about Wicket's birth date since so far I haven't been able to find a source for that other than a comment by Chee on the SW.com message boards, and it feels kinda iffy using that. I have now added the medicine man date, though. Imperators II(Talk) 17:36, 26 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Holocron of Darth Krayt

(1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 15:26, 7 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

OOM
  • Someone please correct me if need be but I don't think we have a status article that showcases an excerpt in this way—and I think, in terms of aesthetics but also to better engage readers along the way, the article would benefit from splitting the excerpt into three quotes. OOM 224 (he/him/they) 19:06, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
    • We do have some Bodo Baas's Master, Ballad of Cham Syndulla, Order 4, Order 5 Lewisr (talk) 01:37, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
      • It is marginally worth noting that the Excerpt template is broken on mobile and has been for years. Given there's no real solution to that and most readers statistically read the site on mobile, using a quote template would suit better (whether in one or broken up).—spookywillowwtalk 06:35, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
    • that's fair, tbh I have no idea why I did it like that besides the article already having the excerpt there when I started working on it. split it into quotes, if you'd prefer them using different parts of the monologue let me know. Sanathestarr (talk) 05:23, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
  • I don't think the intro needs to add "also known as Darth Krayt's holocron," since this is more of a descriptive name rather than a proper compound noun, and currently clutters the text somewhat. I also don't think this specific name needs to be inserted in the first line of the article body and would recommend just letting it appear more organically in the text, if that makes sense. OOM 224 (he/him/they) 17:55, 26 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Tomáš Jeník

(3 ACs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote skvělý OOM 224 (he/him/they) 22:12, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:47, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 01:00, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
  4. CometSmudge (talk) 22:01, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Unidentified orphanage

  • Nominated by: AxMech (talk) 13:02, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 719 words (70 introduction, 619 body, 30 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional):

(0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total)

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Object

Lew
  • Type field in the infobox should be filled out Lewisr (talk) 16:01, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
  • It should note that it was according to legend, see Krayt for example Lewisr (talk) 16:01, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure if it's made clear whether the story happened or if it is an in-universe legend? The book is titled Dark legends but there's no indication that the contents are fictionalAxMech (talk) 21:00, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
      • This here establishes them to be fables Lewisr (talk) 01:54, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
        • Thanks! AddedAxMech (talk) 11:16, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Malloran needs context Lewisr (talk) 16:01, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
  • I think there's a few links missing, examples being bunk, windows (which can pipelink to viewport), lightsaber duel, youngling (being pipelinked on children). Would recommend going through and linking what you can Lewisr (talk) 16:01, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I think I got them all nowAxMech (talk) 11:16, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
      • I snagged the rest Lewisr (talk) 02:29, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Full release date and publisher not needed in the BTS Lewisr (talk) 16:01, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed all!AxMech (talk) 21:00, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
      • The release date still needs changing to just the year Lewisr (talk) 01:54, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
        • Fixed!AxMech (talk) 11:16, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
  • I think the infobox should note it was established after the war Lewisr (talk) 02:29, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Not sure about the sourcing, let me know if it worksAxMech (talk) 11:51, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
      • That seems to be for the building its in rather than the orphanage itself, so probably not worth a date being added after some reconsidering, instead would you add the end of the Clone Wars date into the history? Lewisr (talk) 21:54, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
        • Yeah probably works better that way, fixedAxMech (talk) 11:48, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

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Kharl

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 05:35, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I do kinda wonder if his name was inspired by the Legends Kharl. But I guess we'll never know.
  • Word count at nomination time: 781 words (181 introduction, 586 body, 14 behind the scenes)
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Oro-weave

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 21:23, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 867 words (113 introduction, 433 body, 321 behind the scenes)
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Retention

  • Nominated by: Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 09:39, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Been meaning to do this since I got Rise and Fall, glad I've finally had time. Also accidental collaboration with Derra system.
  • Word count at nomination time: 583 words (129 introduction, 430 body, 24 behind the scenes)
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Lew
  • Derra IV and Lothal could use context Lewisr (talk) 22:16, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I intentionally didn't add this for both initially as a) I think it's redundant to add "astronomical object" as supposed context and b) the whole Lothal schtick is context anyway, but added for both since you asked. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 22:30, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
Wok
  • Should the intro say "greatest Imperial successes of the war" ?
    • Yes, done.
  • In the Description section, I think gravity wells should be mentioned as how they pull the ships from hyperspace.
    • Added, though still in the context of interdictors in general.
  • I believe this is a case where linking to time is not the most appropriate, per a conversation on discord from a while ago. Essentially, the current Time article is really about definition 1 (here: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/time) as opposed to definition 2
    • That makes sense, removed.
  • In Disrupting supplies, shouldn't this part "To accomplish this, Sloane and the Retention's 7th Fleet" just say Sloane and the 7th Fleet? I don't get the impression that the Retention was the lead ship or anything.
    • I believed I actually added that so the Retention was named in all paragraphs. I remember that in the past some reviewers got annoyed if that wasn't the case, but I agree it reads better without. Removed.
  • I think Derra IV probably needs the astronomical object context in the intro
    • Done.
  • So does the ship get reincorporated from exile or no? The intro says "the Imperial forces involved were folded back into mainstream Imperial operations" but the body only says that it resulted in "[Sloane] and the other Imperial leaders being reincorporated into mainline Imperial operations." If the Retention specifically was reincorporated, it should definitely be mentioned in the body. If the source only makes note of the personnel being reincorporated, I would suggest you adjust the intro to say personnel or something instead of forces so it doesn't read as the Retention being reincorporated.
    • It was the leadership; updated in intro.
  • Would you want to add in an image of the Seventh Fleet logo into the Exile section? Wok142 (talk) 19:36, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Nice idea, added.
  • Thanks for the review, just to let you know I reverted your copy edit, as adverbs are not hyphenated unlike regular compound adjectives (see here and here). Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 09:03, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Ah, my mistake, good catch. Wok142 (talk) 18:29, 25 September 2024 (UTC)

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Sa'Kalla

  • Nominated by: Mor9347 (talk) 19:53, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: SA'KALLA
  • Word count at nomination time: 466 words (96 introduction, 265 body, 105 behind the scenes)
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Wok
  • In the first paragraph of Songs of freedom, you describe Pipada as "the Outer Rim planet of" and then also "the Drabatan homeworld of" shortly after. I think it would read better if the second time you mentioned it, you referred to it either as just "Pipada" or simply "the Drabatan homeworld"
  • There seems to be a dissonance in the capitalization of Imperial governor, where governor is not capitalized in the intro but it is in the body. I'm pretty sure it should be lowercase in both instances.
    • Fixed the 2 objections above. Mor9347 (talk) 20:36, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Last sentence of Legacy, it seems neater to just say Pao instead of using the full name with the dashes for a parenthetical phrase. Wok142 (talk) 20:26, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I changed his full name to his shortened name, as "Pao" is more of a nickname than an actual way to say his name, similar to "Ani" for Anakin. Mor9347 (talk) 20:36, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
      • Understood. In that case, do you even need to mention the "Pao" nickname? Feels like you could just leave it at Paodok'Draba'Takat without the part inside the dashes. Wok142 (talk) 22:45, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
        • I could do that! changed! :) Mor9347 (talk) 03:34, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
Comet
  • Her mentions aren't really indirect, since her name is being said. Maybe something like (Mentioned only) (As battle cry) would be better?
  • Both Rogue One and Dawn of Rebellion only need the year in the BTS.
  • Movies don't need the director mentioned.
  • Since Dawn of Rebellion has more than three authors, they don't need to be listed. I also don't think its necessary to mention that its based on Rebels/Rogue One. Other status articles from Dawn also mention that it is a supplement for the Star Wars Roleplaying game, so that should be included.
  • I think it would be worth mentioning the 1 BBY date for the Battle of Scarif.
  • I think your date note should briefly explain the logic that proves she died by Rogue One, like how Dawn says her name was used as a battle cry after her death, and since it was used as a battle cry in Rogue One, she must have died by then.CometSmudge (talk) 02:47, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • I think the use in Alien Archive should be noted in the legacy section Lewisr (talk) 22:09, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Since the Rogue One guide came out on the same day it should be noted as a simultaneous mention, and noted in the BTS Lewisr (talk) 22:09, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Any reason the sources don't also note the name was used in Pao's battle cry? Lewisr (talk) 22:09, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
  • I think there's room for an image (maybe Pao?) in the legacy section now Lewisr (talk) 21:05, 21 September 2024 (UTC)

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Ili P'tan

  • Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 03:41, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 427 words (68 introduction, 336 body, 23 behind the scenes)
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Dembaline

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 05:50, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Sorted the review's objections.
  • Word count at nomination time: 350 words (76 introduction, 244 body, 30 behind the scenes)
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Delphanian

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 17:45, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Addressed the AC review objections.
  • Word count at nomination time: 416 words (84 introduction, 320 body, 12 behind the scenes)
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Pumav

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 04:32, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Former GA restoring; did solve the objections from the previous. It had seemed it'd go under per those points, but after modernizing and adding the equipment, it's still of GA length.
  • Word count at nomination time: 302 words (58 introduction, 211 body, 33 behind the scenes)
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Jollin Resbin

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 05:48, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: FGA, restoring after solving issues.
  • Word count at nomination time: 382 words (68 introduction, 276 body, 38 behind the scenes)
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Vob Bitas

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 19:56, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Restored FGA; it really was only killed for a sole point (lmao) but did the other necessary modernization.
  • Word count at nomination time: 461 words (77 introduction, 213 body, 171 behind the scenes)
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Unidentified scavenger 2

  • Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 18:49, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 313 words (68 introduction, 215 body, 30 behind the scenes)
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Tosinqas

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 06:33, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Restoring FGA.
  • Word count at nomination time: 392 words (58 introduction, 227 body, 107 behind the scenes)
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Nutritive milk

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 07:29, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 346 words (55 introduction, 277 body, 14 behind the scenes)
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Lew
  • I'm not sure the affiliations need to be added in this instance Lewisr (talk) 21:06, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
  • That it was a type of milk should be moved to a description section and Jyn's thoughts on it Lewisr (talk) 21:06, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Wok142 (talk) 06:54, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
      • The info about her about living on the Five Points station should probably be moved back to the history Lewisr (talk) 20:17, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
        • Oh yea good point. Wok142 (talk) 06:25, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
  • The history could use a relevant image Lewisr (talk) 21:06, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Hmm, what images would you recommend? Wok142 (talk) 06:54, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
      • Maybe one of Jyn? Lewisr (talk) 20:17, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
        • Sounds good. Wok142 (talk) 06:23, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
          • Looks like Spooky is taking over this objection now:P Lewisr (talk) 05:16, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Would like to see some dates being added into the body Lewisr (talk) 21:06, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Added some dates. Wok142 (talk) 06:54, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
      • The Seyn Marana date should be changed to 0 ABY since that was post Yavin. Would also note that the Thane scene is in the same year since it's post Death Star being destroyed and his defection (Star Wars Super Graphic: A Visual Guide to a Galaxy Far, Far Away puts this in 0 AWS4). The Berisse is during ESB so we can date that to 3 ABY Lewisr (talk) 20:17, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
        • Should be sorted. Wok142 (talk) 06:23, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
          • I've also added one more date for Jyn's time at Five Points. Wok142 (talk) 07:32, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • I almost feel as if an image of Jyn as a child would be more illustrative since the body is describing her as a young girl and such, and 13 BBY is closer to that timeframe than her later appearance.—spookywillowwtalk 03:43, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I started out with that but realized this: there are two mentions of Jyn with the milk, one of her at 13 yrs old with Saw and one of her at 16 yrs old on her own at Five Points. So instead of representing a 13 yr old Jyn with a 4 yr old photo, I went for a photo of 22 yr old Jyn to represent the Five Points part, where she is about 17. That feels more accurate to me. Another consideration I had would be to use a FOD image to be as close as possible to 17, but those images are more action shots and less portrait-y so I went with the nearest-aged portrait-type photo. Does that make sense? Wok142 (talk) 07:32, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
      • That would make sense. But, the math isn't quite adding up for me—Jyn's page says she was born in 21 BBY, so in 13 BBY, she'd be 8 years old. If that scene (per the date note on the page) happens immediately following Lyra's death, would Jyn in that moment not be more-or-less exactly as she looked in the film's scenes when Galen is taken/Lyra dies? I believe she would have been eight years old then (21-13=8). If it was a difference between 4 and 13 I'd agree that wouldn't really work since humans look very different between toddler and teenager, but it's more of an 8:8 and then later on the other appearance.—spookywillowwtalk 17:48, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
        • The reason I said 4 was because the image option I initially considered of young Jyn was one of her at 4 yrs old (for 13 I think I just said the year instead of her age on accident because you're right, she would be 8 at that time). But I see what you mean. If I used an image of 8 yr old Jyn from the opening sequence on Lah'mu then that would be the most accurate. I'll check to see if there's any decent shots of her face. Wok142 (talk) 19:30, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
          • Hmm I personally don't think there's a great choice from the scenes with 8 yr old Jyn. Every decent shot of her face is like an action shot (teary-eyed, hiding in the grass, etc) and not really a more neutral portrait which is what I feel would be appropriate for this article. Would it be fine to roll with the current image or do you have other ideas? Wok142 (talk) 04:45, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
            • Tbf I'm not entirely convinced there's no promotional shots given almost every LA film has portrait style cards or other media. However, I'll resurface that if one is found and uploaded later on so as not to hold the nom up. I'm fine with striking if it's somewhat agreed here we can look at replacing it when one is located next source run. The magazine issues are quite a bore but probably have one, hence why I'd say that—while not worth holding the nom up for—should be in log proper to replace later since I do genuinely feel like the 22 year old depiction is not best for accuracy here; and there are at least some promo shots like this that aren't that bad and don't have others in frame.—spookywillowwtalk 05:43, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
              • Partially replying on Spooky's behalf, but also to note that the Rogue One guide has an image of Jyn at 8 on the Erso Homestead page, so will leave to you to choose which you prefer to go with (the one Spooky linked from the film or the guide, or any other you may find) Lewisr (talk) 06:15, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
                • Used the amazon preview to see what the visual guide image looks like and that seems good, I'll try to get some upload help from someone who actually has the book. Wok142 (talk) 23:33, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
                  • Ok there we go, thanks for getting the image for me! Wok142 (talk) 19:21, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

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Ire Falk

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 01:41, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 565 words (123 introduction, 403 body, 39 behind the scenes)
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  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:27, 28 September 2024 (UTC)

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Lew
  • Gyndine needs context Lewisr (talk) 01:30, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
  • I think you can include an image of Beaumont in the legacy section Lewisr (talk) 01:30, 1 October 2024 (UTC)

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Adar Tallon

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 01:51, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 365 words (58 introduction, 212 body, 95 behind the scenes)
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Lew
  • The info about what he's wearing should be moved to an equipment section, and the info about his skin color etc should be moved to a personality and traits section Lewisr (talk) 20:55, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

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14th Sector Fleet

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:07, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 291 words (26 introduction, 214 body, 51 behind the scenes)
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Braha
Thrawn
Lew
  • I assume there's a quote from Rise and Fall which can be added? Lewisr (talk) 05:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • There's enough room in the history for an image Lewisr (talk) 05:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Is the info about Levinous entirely relevant to be noted here? Lewisr (talk) 05:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I think so, it gives further context and the quotes don't really work without Levinous being mentioned. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
      • I think at least Levinous should be taken out of the intro unless you can reword it to read a bit smoother Lewisr (talk) 23:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • I think it would be better to change the last sentence of the history to just indicate the book was in 35 ABY and drop mention of the battle, currently the way it's phrased could mean it was at any point after the Battle of Exegol Lewisr (talk) 05:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • The GCW is only mentioned in the intro Lewisr (talk) 23:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

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Melee

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:16, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: If you'd me a month ago that I'd be updating Melee because she was saved by Ochi of Bestoon, I'd have laughed in your face
  • Word count at nomination time: 913 words (163 introduction, 680 body, 70 behind the scenes)
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Eliška Jirotková

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Pax (clone trooper)

  • Nominated by: Outer Shell Electrons (talk) 15:10, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 612 words (85 introduction, 447 body, 80 behind the scenes)
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Comet
  • It would be good to include the 21 BBY date in the intro
    • Date is now in the intro.
  • I think it would be worth including a sentence briefly describing the outcome of the mission after Pax's death
    • Sentence added!
  • It doesn't seem like Dooku's pronouns are citable to the comic
    • Cited!
  • "Unable to be stopped by blaster fire, Pax got overwhelmed by multiple "ghosts"" this sentence sort of reads like Pax is the one who can't be stopped by blaster fire.
    • Reworded it.
  • The infobox cites Pax's gender/species to part 9, but the body cites them to part 10. Both should be cited to the same source. CometSmudge (talk) 00:14, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed.
Wok
  • I'd like to see Pax's dialogue included in the top quote. Wok142 (talk) 23:05, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Included.
Lew
  • The biography should be subsectioned into 2 sets of 2 paragraphs Lewisr (talk) 05:18, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Subsectioned
  • We only typically include the penciller so the colorist should be cut Lewisr (talk) 05:18, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Done
  • Dooku's context as the Separatist leader will need another source as the issue doesn't mention that Lewisr (talk) 05:18, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • I think there might be room to include an image in the top part of the biography, if you put it on the left side and move the bottom image to the right Lewisr (talk) 23:00, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

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Tobias Pall

  • Nominated by: Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 01:38, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I've checked as many TPM adaptations as I can get my hands on. I've only listed appearances/sources that actually depict Pall, as a lot of other adaptations just generally refer to the Naboo present at the Sacred Place, and I didn't feel that constituted an Imo. However, if the consensus is that they should, I have a separate index workbench with those listed, as well.
  • Word count at nomination time: 363 words (66 introduction, 197 body, 100 behind the scenes)
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Comet
  • The storybook actually came out before the movie, so that should be added to the BTS/Appearances CometSmudge (talk) 03:28, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I even made an index and still forgot to change that in the article. Fixed. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 03:58, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
      • Other SAs that mention the book include that it was published by Random House, so I think that should be added. CometSmudge (talk) 05:12, 24 September 2024 (UTC)

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85th Fighter Wing

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 342 words (85 introduction, 183 body, 74 behind the scenes)
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  1. ACvote assuming Lew's happy with below objections being sorted —spookywillowwtalk 02:34, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
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Lew
  • There's room in the history for an image Lewisr (talk) 04:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • We typically avoid saying things were born/created before the thing they were mentioned in/appeared in, so would remove that from the infobox and amend the history to just say they were active during the Imp Era and took part in the event in 3 ABY Lewisr (talk) 04:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Would switching the quotes be better? Lewisr (talk) 04:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • The TIE Fighter 4 should have the publisher mentioned Lewisr (talk) 04:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)

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Flight Simulator Squadron

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 21:45, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Star Wars Kinect vibes
  • Word count at nomination time: 401 words (62 introduction, 247 body, 92 behind the scenes)
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  1. CometSmudge (talk) 22:36, 25 September 2024 (UTC)

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DFaceG
  • I don't rightly recall if there are more quotes outright describing the game, but there's some dialogue from the characters (exclamations or taunting, what have you) that would work for quotes on the article. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:40, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
    • How's that? Wok142 (talk) 22:49, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
Comet
  • The intro says she owned a version of the game, but quotes/body indicate she owned all three versions
  • Template:Game would probably be better here instead of Device
  • The link to sentience is intro-exclusive, but it might be better to just re-word the intro to remove it instead of fitting it into the body since it seems unnecessary to me. CometSmudge (talk) 18:55, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed all. Wok142 (talk) 19:31, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Is there a reason the BTS image isn't in the body instead? CometSmudge (talk) 20:18, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I guess I thought to put it there since I got it from sw.com, but it's just a still from the episode so I can move it. I'm working on getting another image in there as well. Wok142 (talk) 21:29, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
      • Ok moved that image and got another one in there as well. Wok142 (talk) 21:38, 25 September 2024 (UTC)

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Rotar Lopani

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 04:53, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Restoring FGA.
  • Word count at nomination time: 331 words (56 introduction, 237 body, 38 behind the scenes)
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Dorosii

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 06:03, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Restoring FGA.
  • Word count at nomination time: 279 words (74 introduction, 169 body, 36 behind the scenes)
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CompForce

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 22:55, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 375 words (54 introduction, 236 body, 85 behind the scenes)
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Flame-tree

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 19:53, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 392 words (88 introduction, 277 body, 27 behind the scenes)
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Hetzal system monitoring station

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 19:50, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 854 words (142 introduction, 647 body, 65 behind the scenes)
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Peeples's species

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 19:51, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 468 words (82 introduction, 325 body, 61 behind the scenes)
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  1. objections solved via discord Sanathestarr (talk) 07:30, 26 September 2024 (UTC)

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Unidentified Outer Rim star system (39th Emergence)

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 19:51, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 643 words (136 introduction, 478 body, 29 behind the scenes)
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Essurtanium

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 19:49, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 297 words (74 introduction, 194 body, 29 behind the scenes)
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  1. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 05:03, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

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Ironstone

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 19:49, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 442 words (123 introduction, 272 body, 47 behind the scenes)
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Bosbit Matarcher

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 02:16, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Restoring FGA.
  • Word count at nomination time: 372 words (84 introduction, 222 body, 66 behind the scenes)
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Unidentified Twi'lek Nihil

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Chip
  • Since the Twi'lek has blue skin, Rutian should be noted in the infobox, intro, body and a category linking to Rutian Twi'leks. Chipchip88 (talk) 01:38, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Considering three Unidentified Twi'lek Nihil pages could exist, I feel a disambiguation page for Unidentified Twi'lek Nihil should be created. Chipchip88 (talk) 01:38, 27 September 2024 (UTC)

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Jedi romance

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 09:38, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 289 words (65 introduction, 166 body, 58 behind the scenes)
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Corf Ferno

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 00:50, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 681 words (144 introduction, 507 body, 30 behind the scenes)
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Freylon

  • Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 16:14, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 363 words (75 introduction, 232 body, 56 behind the scenes)
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Losha

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 19:31, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Final of Vukorah's tookas
  • Word count at nomination time: 452 words (72 introduction, 323 body, 57 behind the scenes)
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  1. CometSmudge (talk) 03:06, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. Cyborg Commando (talk) 03:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC) Tooka nom 🫡

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Unidentified Imperial officer (hangar Fifteen-D)

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 02:16, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 613 words (151 introduction, 419 body, 43 behind the scenes)
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  1. Wok142 (talk) 19:33, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Copy-edited prior to nom.—spookywillowwtalk 21:16, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

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Rascal

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 02:27, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: WP:TOOKA lives on
  • Word count at nomination time: 353 words (85 introduction, 236 body, 32 behind the scenes)
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Koko Noodle

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 04:56, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The saddest but also the funniest stuff to come from THR is Imri and his eternal sadness over Koko Noodle being destroyed, started off a slightly jokey nom, but here we are
  • Word count at nomination time: 557 words (127 introduction, 393 body, 37 behind the scenes)
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Seek

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:54, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Weird that all the kids eventually became obssessed with Anakin despite Seek seemingly not liking him at all as a child
  • Word count at nomination time: 894 words (188 introduction, 582 body, 124 behind the scenes)
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Unidentified thief (Tatooine)

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:02, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I always figure with these kinda redlinks its best to finish em up and nominate when you make them since it's unlikely anyone's gonna pay attention to them again
  • Word count at nomination time: 410 words (94 introduction, 284 body, 32 behind the scenes)
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