Talk:List of Seattle Kraken seasons
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editHowdy,
- In the intro I would introduce Dave Hakstol earlier, The team began play during the league's 2021–22 season and add on "with Dave Hakstol as their first coach." Somewhere it should be stated that they were an expansion team. * In the sentence finished eighth in their division with due to only having 60 points I would suggest something along the lines of "finished eighth in their division with only 60 points, not good enough to make the playoffs."
- In the sentence which was good for fourth in the Pacific Division and the first wild card spot in the Western Conference. I would add "good for fourth in the Pacific Division and the first playoff wild card spot in the Western Conference". Explains the importance of the wild card.
- An image of the Kraken logo, or a player with the Kraken logo visible would be a nice addition.
- NHL Season should read "NHL season"
Otherwise article is suitably cited and linked. Good job.Llammakey (talk) 18:11, 22 September 2024 (UTC)